http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/487969/ 1) It is a safe link, only my story is displayed. So don't let the 'yaoi' thing scare you. 2) I require feedback to grow as a writer, please critique. 3) One of the longest chapters I've ever done. 4) Has not been proofread yet. 5) Chapters 1-5 are completed. However, for the time being only chapter one will be posted.