Discussion in 'Creative Writing, Graphics, Movies, etc.' started by Secksy, Mar 16, 2009.
So did you read this or just posting a quote?
Anyway those few pages are a horrible read so I'd have to agree with the quote. It's like a mentally retarded DnD player just wrote a novel which is really a list of metaphors he heard other people say while roleplaying.
5 metaphors in I had to stop, holy shit that was terrible.
i saw the title and thought you were talking about twilight, or eragon XD
but i realized those were just BAD, and not amazing at all
HER BREASTS ARE LIKE HONEYCOMBS!
lol. Lotus boobs.
i agree with this statement